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Poetry
09.01.06 (10:58 pm)   [edit]

I had something nice typed out but it got erased so...Here's a poem I read aloud at a reading a few months back.

 

ERASED

eternal love,
locked away,
forever trapped

I remember,
his kiss,
him whole,
his hug,
my soul

eternal love,
locked away.

over time,
he has no face,
no voice,
no kiss,
or embrace

over time,
time displays,
no guy..
no memories..
erased

 

 


posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 09.01.06 (11:15 pm)

Reply to: LadyG

Thank you!




posted by: jenice (reply)
post date: 09.02.06 (12:58 am)

cool poem!



posted by: laydeepulse (reply)
post date: 09.02.06 (1:47 am)

gorgeous poem, i love it very much



posted by: inkspector (reply)
post date: 09.02.06 (8:03 am)

Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.



posted by: girlpower (reply)
post date: 09.02.06 (12:31 pm)

I like your word usage, very creative!



posted by: 69whisper (reply)
post date: 09.02.06 (12:52 pm)

that was great. i never happen to visit your blog before though. i like it. thanx for sharing.



posted by: inkspector (reply)
post date: 09.12.06 (11:11 am)

Repeat visitor rereading your poem.
I like it.

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