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TIME AND DISTANCE
12.05.05 (10:19 am)   [edit]
the sun
exploded,
firework dismay
light and silence,
instilled in me,
fright

my ambitions, light and distance
and..
my
dreams..
show me how,
wrinkle in time
take me far,
take effect,

here is here,
here is now,
instantly,
torrid shadows...
sleeping patterns,
starlit rise,
to fill the sky

i couldn't hear,
and i couldn't see,
nothing to save me,
only time and distance

© Dynamic Drive (www.dynamicdrive.com)



P.S.
(All my poems are copyrighted, just to let you know. No one may use, duplicate, add on, use parts of, ect. in any way, or there will be legal action taken!)

 


posted by: Makaveli (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (10:28 am)

hey..i liked that poem..but is that last note for sure..i mean r u jst jokin or its really copyrighted?



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (10:53 am)

Reply to: Makaveli

No, it's true, their all copyrighted through the Library of Congress. I protect my work...these are poems from my book, I am in the process of looking for a publisher.



posted by: Makaveli (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (10:56 am)

Reply to: Marijane24
oo..great..then u may be famous..;)..k..then good luck..:)



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (10:58 am)

Reply to: Makaveli

LOL, thanks. :)



posted by: sweetsue (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (11:00 am)

awesome as always my friend..and I won't steal it..promise..lol..understand you having to do that these days.



posted by: mercurysoul (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (11:26 am)

MJ..nice poem. I also put my poetry online and use a javascript to deter readers from trying to snag anything. If your interested let me know .. I'll be happy to send it to you. You can never be too careful when it comes to your work.



posted by: keidz (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (6:53 pm)

you're really one of a kind!
i love your work! you can really turn simple words to meaningful works!
goodluck on your book! Ü

===

you might want to try and log on lulu.com (i think that's the site)... they publish books and other written materials.



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 12.05.05 (7:06 pm)

Reply to: keidz

Cool, thanks, I'll check that out.



posted by: graceshaker (reply)
post date: 12.07.05 (11:51 am)

great writing. have you looked into creative commons? its a way to protect your work while also allowing others to use it. its a sorta new thing but i think its cool.



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 12.07.05 (1:22 pm)

Reply to: graceshaker


Yeah, I think I've heard of that, actually I think I've been on that web page, but it's not for me, I don't want to share my stuff. LOL



posted by: Dariana (reply)
post date: 12.08.05 (8:35 am)

A copyright is always advisable, good job. Very lovely writing.



posted by: almsthvn (reply)
post date: 12.08.05 (8:44 am)

:) I like this one - I don't know what else to say besides "I like this one!"

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