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LOST WITH YOU INTERNAL
11.07.05 (1:06 pm)   [edit]
stroll,
what a day for it..
a storm over the horizon,
I see it expend,
and expand,
and expell,
all my insides,
and guts

with a splash of rain,
it washes away,
all the blood and the shocking stains;
still imprints,
still picture frames,
still memories,
will they fade?

running fast, I let go...
grasping straws,
grasping nothing,
...but humiliation,
I created

In my trance,
and shock,
dissapointment of logic,
and impression,
absent minded,
in the distance,
echoes,
I remember what you said,
in the remnants,
of a struggle,
I was lost with you..
internal

 


posted by: sweetsue (reply)
post date: 11.07.05 (1:57 pm)

that is awesome..well written...is it your own poem?...and how is your bf?..hope you both are ok now.^-^



posted by: keidz (reply)
post date: 11.07.05 (2:07 pm)

nice! keep the words flowing! Ü



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 11.07.05 (2:50 pm)

Reply to: sweetsue

Thank you and yes it's mine. =)
I doing good; my boyfriend is out of the hospital, at home, recovering. The doctors say it will at least be six weeks for his body to heal.



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 11.07.05 (2:51 pm)

Reply to: keidz

Thank you.. :)



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 11.07.05 (2:52 pm)

I actually have a book of poems I'm working on...I'm looking for a publisher right now.



posted by: SnuggleB163 (reply)
post date: 11.09.05 (7:42 pm)

Like it.... Have you been published. I was when i was in eigth grade... But like it a lot



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 11.09.05 (7:50 pm)

Reply to: SnuggleB163

Yes, I have been before, It was only one poem though in a book. Now I am trying to put together my own book of poems. =)



posted by: MidnightEpicure (reply)
post date: 11.09.05 (9:05 pm)

i like it- easy to sing to. my poems tend to have much different tone, but feel free to read them.



posted by: rebellious (reply)
post date: 11.10.05 (2:00 pm)

I found it blunt and honest. I really like it :)



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 11.11.05 (8:36 am)

Reply to: rebellious

thanks



posted by: BronwynJ (reply)
post date: 11.11.05 (1:42 pm)

Hi MariJane, I like REM & love Coldplay, too (just visited your profile). Thank-you for visiting my blog & for liking my painting & for your comments. Strange/wonderful about the 'shield' you experienced during the car crash. I'm glad you're ok & your boyfriend is recovering.



posted by: Marijane24 (reply)
post date: 11.11.05 (5:55 pm)

Reply to: BronwynJ

Yeah, that is wierd about that shield I felt, I'm sure it was an angel. :)

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